In the first line are the words that are quite common or the candidate uses incorrect semantics. In the 2nd line are the words you should use when taking the IELTS test to get a high score.
Long history
Time-honored
My hometown is renowned for its time-honored architecture.
Big place
Expansive/roomy
The park adjacent to my residence is remarkably expansive.
Near water
Waterfront
I aspire to reside in a waterfront property someday.
Quiet
Serene or tranquil
In such a serene and tranquil environment, one achieves mental clarity.
Cold, hot
Frosty/chilly, sweltering
My hometown’s climate mirrors northern Vietnam: sweltering summers and frosty winters.
Comfortable
Cozy/inviting
I favor home cinema sessions due to the inviting atmosphere.
Flower
Blossom
This courtyard is adorned with vibrant blossoms.
